雅思英语考试作文是很多烤鸭朋友们比较头痛的一个部分,那么雅思小作文应不应该有结尾呢?我们一起看看下面的文章。
If, however, you have not used a strong introduction and if you only have one main paragraph, then it is sensible to include a conclusion.
如果你的开头段没有阐明主旨,全文又只有一个主要段落,那还是写一个结尾。不过要注意以下几方面:
Length
You don’t have to write too much. A sentence is enough. It can even be quite a short sentence. It can be a mistake to include too much detail in the conclusion as the examiner will cross it out if it is simply copied from the main body of your report.
结尾段不必写太长,可以使用短句子,而且尽量不要在结尾段写一些已经描述过的细节。
Ideas
The danger is you put your own ideas into the conclusion as this is one of the things that you do in academic essays. This is a reporting/summarising task though, so it is a mistake to do this or to interpret the data.
结尾段加入自己的观点是很危险的,这只是一个“看图说话”的题目,所以不用加入自己的观点或者用自己的观点去解释那些数据,文中图表反映了什么,如实写就可以了,就算是一些趋势、走向,也是直接反映在图表中的哦!
Content
The usual rule is that you should not put any new detail into a conclusion, but only summarise your main content paragraphs. This means in practice that you pick out the main details of the chart/graph you have been looking at. This will be typically the main trends or patterns in the chart/graph.
结尾段不要写新东西,主要是对重点段落的总结。可以归纳一下图表反映出来的主要趋势。
How to do it
Here’s the trick. When you write the conclusion, don’t look at the graph or what you have already written. If you do that, you may write too much or write something too complex. The conclusion should be simple.Try this. Look away. See what you remember about the graph. There should be 2 or 3 main points. These are the points you include in your conclusion
写结尾不要去参考已经写出来的段落,尽量保持简洁明了!凭自己的记忆,对图表的主要特征做哟个概括,两三个要点就好!