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In many countries, it is convenient for people to buy a variety of food from all over the world.
To what extent do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?
这道题目
考生在表态“利大于弊”后,
在文章第二段,是这样写第1句话的
There are two major advantages about this trend.
☆ 这样的一个简单句怎么还会出问题呢?
教师修改后如下
There are two major reasons why being able to buy food from around the world is advantageous.
☆ 其实最关键的还是this trend,往往我们在开头介绍过“this trend”的具体内容后,就会顺其自然默认为已知内容,从而在另起一段后还在使用“代词”,但这其实就“指代落空”了,那么,不妨把this trend具体内容还是再写一遍吧!
☆ the reason why … 是定语从句常用结构
☆ advantageous 有利的 adj.