阅读量:
每次教你学会一个7分句/段。
雅思7分作文,
就是日复一日、点点滴滴的积累。
Some people believe that university students should pay all the costs of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本文立场:偏向于【不同意】。
不同意的【理由】:让步:大学教育对个人有好处 → 个人付主要学费;立论:对社会整体有好处 → 政府可用奖学金方式弥补部分学分,且对极度贫穷家庭需予以帮助
【段落示范】【让步】
1. Admittedly, higher education can bring certain gains to individual students.
这一句简要写一个总起句。
2. More accurately, it is through pursuing college-level education that students can acquire professional knowledge and skills which will facilitate them to secure a decent job with a generous salary so as to earn their daily sustenance after graduation.
详细解释,横向展开,点明大学教育具体给个人带来什么好处。最为直接的好处落在物质层面——找到体面的工作。
3. Meanwhile, having participated in diverse seminars and lectures, students can also sharpen their wits, think out of the box, and spice up their lives.
平行与上一句的观点,点出除就业以外,其他精神层面的好处。注意为了避免叙述过于空洞,可把大学提供的具体事物细化——研讨会与讲座。
4. In this case, it is justifiable to charge ordinary students a reasonable tuition fee.
回点题干。
5. As to the students from impoverished families, they can finish college via loans provided by the government.
考虑全面,点出特殊情况:即使是贫穷背景,也是依靠政府贷款,后期仍需自己还款,等同于还是学生自己支付。
【解析】
1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 ***
审题时候注意题目中讲到了一个因果逻辑链,需证明因果逻辑是否成立。借助极端词,让步写“对个人有好处,因此个人需付学费”;立论写“不止对个人有好处,对社会也有好处,因此政府也需以其他方式承担部分”。脱离这个因果逻辑链的阐述,大概率会走向跑题。
其它,见文中批注。
2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 ***
见文中批注。
3. 词汇(Lexical Resource)
文中红色加粗的词汇,需要记忆和学会。
4. 语法(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
第2句中,主句为it is…that…强调句,which引导定语从句后,再用so as to引出结果状语,完成因果逻辑链。
第3句故意采用【现在完成时】,强调前后动作的顺序,暗示【因→果】的关系。