3分钟就能学的雅思语法 (第6期):平行结构的省略

雅思语法 04/21

·3分钟就能学会的雅思语法·


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上一期,我们了解了基本的平行结构,大家是否还有印象呢?

平行结构在口语写作中尤为适用,我们经常会用平行结构来提高句子的复杂度,从而提高语法分数。


然而在口写中,大家就平行结构如何省略总会出现一些问题。


错误一:平行结构主谓不一致






Part-time job experience gives students an insight into what work is about and make them prepare psychologically for their future jobs.


解析:该平行结构省略了主语,主语为part-time job experience,and平行了两个谓语动词gives和make,但是make出现了主谓不一致的问题。


修改:Part-time job experience gives students an insight into what work is about and makes them prepare psychologically for their future jobs.


错误二:平行结构的主语不一致


Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens and should ban to purify the social environment.


解析:该句主语为information, 第二个and平行了两个谓语动词threatens和should ban,略主语。但是information无法主动发出should ban的动作,所以句子歧义


修改:Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens andshould be banned to purify the social environment.

或:Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens andthe government should ban to purify the social environment.


错误三:省略后的平行部分结构不一致


Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, take part in entertaining activities, and to enjoy outdoor sports.


解析:该句平行三个不定式to afford,to take part in,to enjoy,但是在省略过程中,不定式的结构并未平行一致,同样改正的方式有两个,一个是变为to take;一个是删除to enjoy中的to.


修改:Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, to take part in entertaining activities, and to enjoy outdoor sports.

或:Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, take part in entertaining activities, and enjoyoutdoor sports.


总结

平行结构的省略用法在雅思口语写作中要确保平行结构主谓一致,省略的主语一致,以及平行结构一致。大家是否学会了呢?尝试一下应用到平常的练习中吧?