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托福写作185题库之第72题范文

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72. Do grades encourage students to learn?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

『分析』

不同意比较好写一些。承认grades的一些意义的情况下,指出grades的众多副作用。

观点:Grades do not always encourage students to learn.

Grade对学生的好处:便于教学体系的整体管理。有利于学生循序渐进(follow the principle of gradual

improvement)地学习。可以使学生了解自我的学习效果。

Grade带来的副作用:无情的竞争使学生们为了高分而不择手段(resort to every expedient),比如作弊

(cheat)。高分带来骄傲(arrogant; be too big for one's shoes/boots),而低分使学生灰心失望(lose hope)

甚至放弃(abandon learning motivation)。

参见:范文

『范文』

Does grade really encourage students to learn, and guarantee a qualified education? Hardly. Given the

opportunity, students spend time using their intelligence to figure out how to get a higher or top grade without

doing the real work of the course and without thinking, rather than spending the same time thinking and exploring,

regardless of what grade this may bring them. It isn't that these students are not motivated. It's just that they're not

motivated to learn as much as they're motivated to get good grades. Once one became grade-oriented in your

thinking, it is difficult for him/her to stop thinking that way.

Anybody who gets top grades is, in some sense, a winner of the system. But these seeming winners are, far

too often, losers of a more important game. To win the grade competition in high school, most of these "winners"

learned to ask what was expected of them and then do just that. They had to make sure they got high SAT scores by

memorizing endless vocabulary words and by practicing a 1001 uses of the Pythagorean Theorem. They wanted to

know from their high school teachers if the material being covered on a given day was going to be on the test,

because they realized early on that the test is all that matters.

When these "successes" of the system arrive in college, they, of course, have not changed their attitudes. They

fear open-ended assignments. They are impatient with discussions mat are not going in any particular direction

except where the interests of the discussants dictate, since they know that such discussions waste time that could

have been better spent studying for a test. What these students have learned from school is the underlying message

that the world is run by authorities who have definite points of view. The system has taught them that the way to get

along in the world is to understand and to cater to those points of view espoused by the educational "authorities".

Cleverness pays, but disagreement does not. Such students are in the process of becoming "yes men."

On the other hand, students who do less well in high school are often rebelling against curricula they see as

irrelevant to their lives. This type of student judges what goes on in school according to how well it relates to his

own day-to-day concerns. If algebra does not seem relevant to the problems such students face, then they see little

need to pay attention to it. Under such circumstance, the school might have been able to embed algebra instruction

inside a task they cared about, causing them to want to know algebra because it would help them do something they

wanted to do. But schools generally don't think like this, so the conclusion drawn by many students is mat since so

much is irrelevant, they might as well tune it out. These students learn to get by as well as they can, separating

themselves from other kids who are willing to play the game.

 
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