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托福写作范文

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《教程》Page 112 - 综合写作

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The reading’s third argument attributes China’s defeat in the Sino-Japanese war to that Cixi diverted the funds that should have been used for China’s navy and used it to rebuild Beijing Summer Palace and to restore a marble boat. Opposing the reading, 我们的写作中,需要充分回应阅读材料和听力材料之间的关系(通常为冲突) the lecture gives credit to Cixi for her contribution to China’s modernization and attempt to build a constitutional monarchy of China, and argues that the marble boat was used to entertain the Europeans and to strengthen the Sino-Europe relationship. (81 words) ← 充分还原和回应材料文的内容是得分关键(当然,可以转述,但是需要更高的措辞技能,如果尚不具备,可以照搬)。

 

如果通过转述精简(但是需要更高的措辞技能)The reading also attributes China’s defeat to the Japanese to that Cixi’s diversion of funds supposedly used for China’s navy to the renovation of Beijing Summer Palace and restoration of a marble boat. Opposing the reading, 我们的写作中,需要充分回应阅读材料和听力材料之间的关系(通常为冲突) the lecture acknowledges Cixi’s contribution to China’s modernization and attempt to build a constitutional monarchy, and considers the marble boat, having pleased the Europeans, useful in the Sino-Europe relationship. (65 words)

 

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