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高产“章”又来了,这次咱们聊托福独立写作

2019-12-30 10:52     作者 :    

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       请大家先拿出《新托福写作真经6》,翻到Page 195。接下来我们以【立场:Agree】为例,示范essay的body部分,主要学习两个“新的”论证套路。


托福独立写作-论证套路


  The something that I do not like may be an occasional or rare case. ←论证思路的亮点:以circumstance为切入点 (此处有福利:这个逻辑切入点直接接驳GRE写作的要求)。I do not think that I would stop being friends with that person just because of the rare or infrequent occurrence of such a case. If most of the things that friend does align with my ideas and there are a few times I may disagree with him or her, I think, to be realistic, that the friendship is already sound, since there would be no people who could always think the way I think or do things my way. ←复杂句型:为什么(原因状语从句)在某种条件下(条件状语从句)发生某件事情(主句)。As a matter of fact, this happens to me and to everyone. If a friend of mine chooses a journey with some people I do not know over a party that celebrates my birthday, our friendship would not end, although theabsence may be unpleasant, admittedly. ←复杂句型:在某种条件下(条件状语从句)发生某件事情(主句), 虽然什么情况发生(让步状语从句)。Thetoleration is necessary since I would not be able to guarantee that everything I do would please him.


  复杂句型为长句,长句的信息量大

  是段落内容的核心

  其它句子的作用是:

  引入、铺陈、过渡、补充、总结等


  At this point, tolerance is important also because ←使得段落之间形成联系 if a friendship stops just because I cannot accept anything I disagree with, I would not have any friends. 论证思路的亮点:以consequence为切入点 (此处有福利:这个逻辑切入点直接接驳GRE写作的要求)。As is mentioned above, there would be no people who could always think the way I think or do things my way. In other words, it would be idealistic that none of our friends would ever do anything that we dislike, and we would be setting the bar too high, and, as a result, seldom would we have any friendship with anyone. ←复杂句型:平行复合句。复杂句型为长句,长句的信息量大,是段落内容的核心。Unfortunately, one of my dorm-mates adopts this unrealistic view. I constantly hear his complaints that his friends annoy him as they do something he does not like, and many of his friendships have been terminated until this fussy dorm-mate has no friends at all.


  两个段落的举例论证部分都是用了“小”例子(对应“大”例子):

  没有设置复杂的情境

  (时间、地点、背景等)


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