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The topic is on Page 95 of the 《新托福写作真经6》
“二”类型:“二选一”
·写作范文
Introduction
Children of business tycoons are enviable, because they work for themselves. If I had the chance to quit the current job and work for my family, I would not hesitate. ← 学会“潜台词”措辞,作文就更有“风格”。
两种立场,两种写作技巧(不是纯语言技巧,即词汇、语法、句法,而是措辞技巧和写作写作技巧)
Although I can work for my family business, I do not. I have a number of compelling reasons for my decision and to persuade my family not to bother me with their job offer. ← 学会“讲故事”,作文就更有“带入感”。
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思路
Conclusion
充分回应introduction
Again, I envy (回应了introduction里的enviable) those children whose parents or grandparents are business tycoons, because I would otherwise work for my family or myself. I would immediately work for it if my family one day establishes our own business.
I do not regret that I did not choose to work for my family business. I have also been persuasive (回应了introduction里的persuade) about this decision when my family bothers me with their job offer.