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✦今年疫情一爆发，国内各博物馆、艺术馆纷纷闭馆，人们只能线上观展了。那这些场馆在疫情结束后还要不要开放呢？
✦本题目认为博物馆、艺术馆的功能就是存放展品的，这个观点对吗？另外，电脑看展品有现场看展品的体验好吗？
✦看看下面的博物馆和艺术馆，只用来放展品是不是太憋屈？
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【核心段1】Admittedly, by simply clicking the mouse, people can access some websites that feature <v.以…为特征> renowned artefacts and works of art, engaging in a virtual tour without stepping a foot inside the actual museums or galleries. （→简单让步后转折，反驳这种体验并比不上现场的体验）However, this experience pales in comparison to <显得逊色，相形见绌> the in-person experience.（→给出理由）The most prominent reason lies in the atmosphere. (→具体展开，添加一些具象化的细节)The well-designed lighting and elaborate <精心制作的> decoration in the buildings, as well as the company of other visitors, can spark<激发> a person’s sense of connection with the exhibits on display, opening the door to<使…成为可能> full immersion; (→加入对比，增强反驳力度)this, nevertheless, is completely impossible with a computer no matter how vivid the images it can present.
✦这一段让步部分不要花笔墨去写用电脑看展品的好处，只要承认电脑能看就行。
✦反驳电脑看展品的体验时，不要单纯从展品本身的角度来说（因为展品图片完全可以做到非常清晰，说明详尽），而要从展品本身之外的“氛围”角度入手更好。
✦看下现场版的演唱会，和只能用电脑看的演唱会，气氛方面不言而喻了吧？
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【核心段2】（→中心句陈述这些场所的功能不只是存放展品）In fact, there is more to public museums and art galleries than a warehouse. （→首先是经济效益 ）The economic effects are significant. People from near or far,（→分词短语在前，表达一种前置原因）once drawn to those tourist attractions, are very likely to not only pay an actual visit but also pay for their transport, food and even accommodation, （→分词短语在后，表达一种结果）thereby contributing to the local economy. （→其次也是国家的象征符号） In addition, those buildings bear a nation’s symbolic<象征性的>meaning. （→注意本句中两对动词的使用效果）As they store historical artefacts and oil paintings, museums and galleries preserve our identity; the former build a nation’s historical image and the latter forge<努力缔造>a nation’s artistic profile. National citizens, at the sight of those distinctive buildings, can be easily reminded of their roots while this resonance<共鸣>tends to wither away<逐渐消失>when such meaningful symbols disappear.
✦注意本段第二个观点是博物馆和艺术馆本身的象征意义，不要写成文物和艺术作品。
✦尝试把句子写长，重心信息放在主句，其他信息放在短语或从句，语法结构就相对升级了。
✦通过选择适当的动词，来给句子一些“色彩感”，感觉是不是就不平庸了？
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