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【task 1图表类型】柱图-剑17-Test 3
考核点:不同时间,数值比较
The bars illustrate how the weekly income was allotted for different purposes by households in one country in two separate years: 1968 and 2018.
核心词汇替换:
allot v. 分配(time or money)
household 一家人,一户,家庭
分组思路:两类柱子的差异大小,body 1【年份间数据差异较大组: 前2组+最后2组】;body 2【中间剩余4组,差异小】。
In the categories of food, housing, transport and leisure, the difference between the two years was particularly large, ranging from 7% to 18%. To specify, people spent proportionally more in 2018 than in 1968 in terms of the use of transport, participation in entertaining activities and housing, and there was an opposite situation in terms of the expenditure on food, which constituted the largest portion (35%) in 1968. [定语从句]
Fuel and power, clothing and footware, household goods and personal goods are the four categories in which people did not spend obviously more in one year and obviously less in the other year. [定语从句] In these categories, the difference was within 5%. It is notable that no difference is found between the two years in terms of people’s expenditure on household goods. The spending on fuel and power (around 5%) is particularly noteworthy, as it was the far smaller expense in both two years.
【body-语言点小结】
1. 句子主语的变化
2. 动词时态【描述当时情况的时候,使用一般过去时;描述纯粹大小关系的时候,使用一般现在时】
Overall, the difference between the two years varied from category to category, and the enormous spending on food and leisure stand out.